Fixing poor headlines used as links
Chubby Babies in Breast Cancer Link
According to a recent study, chubby babies are more likely to develop various forms of cancer later in life.
Improved:
Female wrestling at US camp probed
It shouldn’t take one long to figure out the ways in which this headline could be misinterpreted. Just who or what is being probed, the wrestler or the wrestling?
Note the source of the headline. Is it possible, or even likely, that Al-Jazeera.net intentionally published such an imprecise and potentially tawdry headline? Every other headline linking to stories about the same event from GoogleNews was clear and unmistakable.
This story originated after 30 leaked photos, which depicted some female military police mudwrestling in their underwear, appeared in a New York Post article on Sunday. Predictably, the incident is under investigation. One of the soldiers attached to a NC National Guard unit has been demoted and is under restriction at
Improved:
Mudwrestling at US camp draws investigation


1 Comments:
great headline fixes, drew. you've got the knack.
be sure to check out steven's fix of the mudwrestling headline.
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